You Go! Brave Little Yellow Croaker! Fall In Love!

[CattusCruris]

This isn't really for me, but I hope someone got enjoyment out of it.

 

[ZombiesAreNotOkay]

Well, at least now it makes sense.

 

[Kllick]

.............. What's the story again? Oh right, no story.

 

[demonrecon]

theres one page that makes it a must see. sadly thats the only page.

 

[dysperwithaperiod]

this is the manga equivalent of the big bang theory.

 

[kinokuri]

what the fuck is going on

 

[Metazoxan]

IMO this is terrible. Not because it's weird but largly because of it's art style... it's just too busy. So much is just crammed on screen without much reason so the pages end up so busy it's more an eye sore than anything.

That's not to say black and white manga HAS to be the way to go. But you need more focus on your pages. I'm probably not explaining this the best but just look at American comics. The good ones can sometimes have a lot going on but there is still a focus and order... unless the point is just absolute chaos. But even then the chaos is used sparingly for the impact and isn't the norm.

 

[N7NobodyCats]

im pretty sure this is just a massive shitpost, theres little to no backstory, a bunch of random shit thrown in that makes no sense about the story, and its way to late whe nit decides to give backstory about what happened on the 3rd or 4th chapter, but even still the first 1-3 chapters are literally all about nothing important at all which is pointless and further solidifies my idea that this is just a shitpost

 

[Hakin]

Too random right? The author must be on acid when writing this.