Dex-chan lover
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- Jul 4, 2020
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Yeah, I only realized what you meant after I hit post, and have no idea how to delete posts on here.No no, I totally understand the power scaling. What I don’t understand is this batshit crazy pacing. Good story-telling doesn’t do this. For the first part of the story, this author did a great job at explaining events and how the world works with unique societal norms, etc. But the sheer ABRUPTNESS of supergod (Dragonlords) level beings coming into the story RIGHT AFTER we get a show of power from the wives is just weird as fuck. It makes no logical sense to have the plot do that. It’s jarring.
If they went on a few quests where the wives get back into practice and having the MC get integrated with their teamwork, I could see that being a normal progression. Also more updates with the hero’s squad struggling as they inevitably make their way towards Ceres’s milf team. I could see that happening. But saying Ceres killed 100+ dragons and then having dragon lords turn him into basically a god IN ONE CHAPTER is NOT it chief.
This story had an incredible foundation, and most people agreed (90k+ bookmarks with less than 20 chapters released, and a high rating). But man, if this goes in the direction of the light novel, it’ll be like chucking a meteorite the size of New York at that foundation. It’s like starting with 3 million in cash assets and then throwing it all into a stock that is predicted to fail within a month. This is how bad this manga will be if it follows the light novel.
I definitely agree that the pacing is a bit off though. MC went from being just the errand boy/logistics lead for the hero's party, to suddenly hunting enough dragons that they are now actively fleeing the area he is in. Add on to that the fact that the MILF team went from "The strongest" to unable to even put up a fight (Probably until they start absorbing dragon magic from MC's sperm). Meanwhile the hero's party is now on a crash course with Ceres, and will likely meet up, get saved, walk in on him fucking all of their moms, and fanboy over him all in one chapter