Jinsei Gyakuten - Uwaki sare, Enzai wo Kiserareta Ore ga, Gakuen Ichi no Bishoujo ni Natsukareru - Ch. 1

[betetta]

This shit so ass it can make a mf cry. who in their right mind do not resort to violence in any of these situations? What kind of low life bum do you have to be to not beat the fuck out of the dude or anyone else? Sure i get that he was in shook when he first discovered his gf is cheating on him so he might not have reacted. But then the other day in school when the girl accused him with that face how come he just fucking took it up the ass?? And same goes for almost every situation in the whole chapter. And above all how the fuck did he not beat the living fuck out of the bastard when he came back to mock him in school???? What the fuck is this writing??? i get that he’s a bum but seriously the more of a loser you are the faster you resort to violence in these situations. No matter what type of person you are, you’d lose it at some point through this chapter but he just takes it up ass??? am not fully mad because he’s such a degenerate but am mad because the author is treating my brain pretty rudely.

Easy, the other guy is bigger and stronger and the whole school is already against you to the point of death threats and doxxing, Mc was mind broken before he could even think of lashing out

 

[betetta]

Spoiler: spoiler

Yeah my major issue with is how fast everything wraps up and the romance develop. MC gets betrayed and traumatized so bad he is suicidal, by a girl he has loved most of his life and within weeks he is already in love with another girl he has just known for about a week. What is this crap???

That actually has an easy explanation... The author probably only planned less than a 100 chapters and a quick conclusion, but since it got traction, he's expanding the story to meet demand

 

[RandomnessOfTheMathWorld]

One page one trope

 

[HappyRogue]

Wow, this is awful, i wanna read more.

 

[Jsan42]

Easy, the other guy is bigger and stronger and the whole school is already against you to the point of death threats and doxxing, Mc was mind broken before he could even think of lashing out

Spoiler

What I find hilarious is the people who say they always believed the protagonist wouldn't do this because he was too kind after everything was cleared up, but these people disappeared when the bullying was happening.

 

[OSAITUS]

dude, after reading the spoilers... I can´t say i´m surprised, this sounds like that type of stories... to be honest i kind of want to bookmark this just to read the las half of the second half of the whole story... this will be a rage farm for, at least 2/4 of the whole thing(very repetitive after, say... this chapter if you ask me), I just want to see the karma

 

[SleepyDemon]

I mean...pretty sure you lose victim card status here when it didn't take a threat of violence, death or meaningful consequence to throw your bf into a metaphorical pool of sharks but just a "I'll go to another woman instead" from the guy you weren't supposed to be with but stuck around because you were bored of your bf.

 

[Kingdex88]

Why didn't he show people the messages he had with his childhood friend talking about the date?

 

[PeachyLightning]

I know Japanese culture is different, but my lord is the MC is a pssy, lol. You telling me you got btched out by the guy who stole your girl and now you gonna end your life? pssssyyy

 

[Devvyy]

Though miyuki and the other guy are a little over the top, I do think the depictions of feeling trapped and helpless are done pretty well. Especially with the worry over getting his family involved. Emotionally it works but yeah there are some logical problems, first one being that not a single person seems to have asked for specifics. Like they say he's abusive and violent, but no one (at least no one we're shown) bothers to ask for an example. I don't know if it's more common over there for friends to suddenly turn on someone over hearsay, but getting too worked up over the details isn't worth it.

I just hope it handles the fallout well, and isn't a matter of "he does bad things!" "Oh yeah like what?" "Wtf... I don't know! Forgive me eiji sama!". If this new girl defends him and everyone else takes her word for it as if they didn't just try to ruin his life I'm going to hate the class even more.

Edit: I read the spoilers, it doesn't sound very entertaining imo. Just sets up a villain punching bag and immediately dishes out catharsis with some pretty contrived plot points. Hopefully the execution is done well, we'll see.

 

[Ainkrip]

I know Japanese culture is different, but my lord is the MC is a pssy, lol. You telling me you got btched out by the guy who stole your girl and now you gonna end your life? pssssyyy

This manga and school don't make sense even for Japan and its culture lol. Nobody in Japanese school would react or behave like this.

 

[kmd3133]

She is the same like the hentai mindless girl after getting ducked and turn into a pet of the abuser. Disgusting. Other people also disgusting judging people by popularity, and you know what once they learn the truth noone would pay for what they have done. If that girl wasnt at the rooftop mc would of jumped off and then the guilt becomes bigger she cant keep it to herself confesses for nothing or not confessing it and people talk about how he deserved it. This is really shittiest ntr hentai plot, honestly i cant even be angry to the shitty guy its the girl's fault totally. Almost whole school guilty and they should be charged. Even if he was an abuser (im talking about mc) you can just tell to the parents directly to determine if its true or not. Instead of oh im by your side you r the perfect student.

 

[lovolo]

I mean...pretty sure you lose victim card status here when it didn't take a threat of violence, death or meaningful consequence to throw your bf into a metaphorical pool of sharks but just a "I'll go to another woman instead" from the guy you weren't supposed to be with but stuck around because you were bored of your bf.

Yeah the NTR guy is kinda tame for NTR guy (I know the bar is in hell) aside from his twirling mustache I love destroying lives spiel? He didn't blackmail her with videos or photos, he didn't threaten the GF about the BF, he didn't drug the girl like in the usual NTR doujins. Hell he even gave her a choice here. But the girl is too deep to turn back?

Though miyuki and the other guy are a little over the top, I do think the depictions of feeling trapped and helpless are done pretty well. Especially with the worry over getting his family involved. Emotionally it works but yeah there are some logical problems, first one being that not a single person seems to have asked for specifics. Like they say he's abusive and violent, but no one (at least no one we're shown) bothers to ask for an example. I don't know if it's more common over there for friends to suddenly turn on someone over hearsay, but getting too worked up over the details isn't worth it.

I just hope it handles the fallout well, and isn't a matter of "he does bad things!" "Oh yeah like what?" "Wtf... I don't know! Forgive me eiji sama!". If this new girl defends him and everyone else takes her word for it as if they didn't just try to ruin his life I'm going to hate the class even more.

Edit: I read the spoilers, it doesn't sound very entertaining imo. Just sets up a villain punching bag and immediately dishes out catharsis with some pretty contrived plot points. Hopefully the execution is done well, we'll see.

I know her friends hate him and set up her, but 10 years of childhood friend and becoming lover and none think it's weird that it changed overnight?

I spent a few hours last night reading the WN, it’s around chapter 80 after the school assembly event that clears Eiji and everyone knows the truths of situation. Wonder what will happen to Miyuki.

Spoiler

Well she just can’t do anythings other than stays at home keeps regretting. Encountering a fate that her life will be doomed soon, her mother hate her, almost sure that she will be expelled from school and problably losing her house since Eiji’s mother will call a compensation if necessary forcing her mother to sell the house that tried so hard to settle in this town. If things are the same as LN her mother will die and she become homeless. Such a sad fortune, no redemption.

More info about Eri and the club president

Spoiler

Eri
After found out that Kondo did the same thing as her to other girl, she started investigating and found out that their formal classmate, now held position of the literature club president, Tachibana, is the mastermind of these things. Cooperating with Ai’s servant, they also play major role, manage to put Tachibana into cell and will soon prison.

The Literature Club President, Tachibana “The Manager”
The manager is what the club’s members call her. She and Kondo are sex-friend, I doubt they have started this relationship before messing with Eri. Hating Eri that is best than her in class, she ruined her life. Hating Eiji that is best than her in literature, she almost success ruined his life too.

Man this is too much for me. I hate that the mom got the worst fate of all? Why didn't they just move away to countryside and Miyuki can do the self-pity party everyday? Also, she sucks and guilty but no one doing the bare minimum like what they did to Eiji?

 

[Statyc]

Spoiler

What I find hilarious is the people who say they always believed the protagonist wouldn't do this because he was too kind after everything was cleared up, but these people disappeared when the bullying was happening.

Eiji is an unreliable narrator. There's no objective narrator in this story, so all the narration is a bit unreliable. It's always told from a character's perspective and their perception. Thus, we get Eiji seeing the world is against him, when in reality it's just Kondo's soccer thugs and a few others ganging up on Eiji.

Also, people love it when bad things happen to other people. Nothing in the universe is faster than light...except for a scandalous rumor.

 

[Richman]

This shit is unsalvageable bro...

 

[kmd3133]

Eiji is an unreliable narrator. There's no objective narrator in this story, so all the narration is a bit unreliable. It's always told from a character's perspective and their perception. Thus, we get Eiji seeing the world is against him, when in reality it's just Kondo's soccer thugs and a few others ganging up on Eiji.

Also, people love it when bad things happen to other people. Nothing in the universe is faster than light...except for a scandalous rumor.

natural bc in a victim's mind you cant find any help and you cant say he didnt try to find. and we also saw what the girl thinks for the start at least.

 

[kmd3133]

Yeah the NTR guy is kinda tame for NTR guy (I know the bar is in hell) aside from his twirling mustache I love destroying lives spiel? He didn't blackmail her with videos or photos, he didn't threaten the GF about the BF, he didn't drug the girl like in the usual NTR doujins. Hell he even gave her a choice here. But the girl is too deep to turn back?



I know her friends hate him and set up her, but 10 years of childhood friend and becoming lover and none think it's weird that it changed overnight?


Man this is too much for me. I hate that the mom got the worst fate of all? Why didn't they just move away to countryside and Miyuki can do the self-pity party everyday? Also, she sucks and guilty but no one doing the bare minimum like what they did to Eiji?

girl really became like a slave for s*x she behaves like a pet, really. 10 years of emotions changed over a week bc she is dumbly believed its all fine she can duck with some guy and also have a boyfriend. im glad to see the spoilers and im only sad for girl's mom. other than her i dont even care. i cant understand what you r talking about by saying ''why cant they do the bare minimum like they did for eiji'' but he almost jumped off from rooftop if there was noone there. can u say bare minimum for that? she is as guilty as others bc she selfishly kept the truth for herself for what? bc she was afraid that everyone will bully her like they did to mc.

 

[Edway89]

That actually has an easy explanation... The author probably only planned less than a 100 chapters and a quick conclusion, but since it got traction, he's expanding the story to meet demand

I'm sorry but this is still poor narrative pacing.

 

[Edway89]

Yeah the NTR guy is kinda tame for NTR guy (I know the bar is in hell) aside from his twirling mustache I love destroying lives spiel? He didn't blackmail her with videos or photos, he didn't threaten the GF about the BF, he didn't drug the girl like in the usual NTR doujins. Hell he even gave her a choice here. But the girl is too deep to turn back?



I know her friends hate him and set up her, but 10 years of childhood friend and becoming lover and none think it's weird that it changed overnight?


Man this is too much for me. I hate that the mom got the worst fate of all? Why didn't they just move away to countryside and Miyuki can do the self-pity party everyday? Also, she sucks and guilty but no one doing the bare minimum like what they did to Eiji?

Sht is a poorly written revenge porn. MC got verbally abused and ostracized for like 3 days and wanted to end it all. Weak as hell.

 

[Statyc]

girl really became like a slave for s*x she behaves like a pet, really. 10 years of emotions changed over a week bc she is dumbly believed its all fine she can duck with some guy and also have a boyfriend. im glad to see the spoilers and im only sad for girl's mom. other than her i dont even care. i cant understand what you r talking about by saying ''why cant they do the bare minimum like they did for eiji'' but he almost jumped off from rooftop if there was noone there. can u say bare minimum for that? she is as guilty as others bc she selfishly kept the truth for herself for what? bc she was afraid that everyone will bully her like they did to mc.

While a timeline is never stated (or I missed it), it feels like it was a month or two before the affair really started, and then they may have carried on for a month before being caught. It wasn't just in one week. I think it makes the betrayal a bit worse since she lied about it for so long.

Also, it doesn't seem to me like sex was as big a factor. A factor, but not the factor. Her character definitely has more depth than that. It was more emotional, helped by Kondo spoon-feeding her easy outs and stroking her ego.