Dex-chan lover
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- Jan 24, 2023
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This.Dunno how that would be interesting tbh. There is 0 setup for such a development (their relationship is arguably going stronger than ever sans the music bit) and those other characters still are absolute strangers to us that barely have any connection to the mains.
We know they are quite whiny and into the mains. That‘s it.
Author completely lost me now. How are you supposed to form any kind of opinion on these new characters when all they do is monologue in the most main chara syndrome way and uwu stop being nice to me or..
4 chapters showcasing Aya and Koga‘s perfect relationship that people can only dream of into 1 chapter of two randoms woe is me I am falling for this savior.
I am sorry but repeating that over and over just doesn‘t work and do anything IMO. Much rather would have some organic progress soon.
I dont mind angst. But adding 2 randoms after all thoses chapters? And they like our inseparable MCs? I really cant enjoy this. Plus the fact it is not even miscommunication, It's straight ZERO communication wich is really bad writing (to my taste of course!).
Even if it ends with the 2 "rivals" liking each other (wich i really think is the main goal) I dont like the writing: "our mcs don't talk at all."
They will never break up, it's not this kind of story at all. Plus they dont even show ANY interest to shu nor ringo. So I dont get it. Pointless imo.