Watashi wo Tabetai, Hitodenashi - Ch. 60 - The Choice to Secure the Future

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I like this translation more. Fishwoman's thoughts were more clear here. She finally said out loud what she observed for a while. "My gift was more of a curse than anything else in shiori's life. Things would've been better for her had she never met me." That sort of thing. And the best part is shiori heard it. Now she knows for sure how much the fish loves her and regrets all the pain she unintentionally caused.

I'm really excited for the next chapter. I hope they bare their hearts to each other and maybe they develop their love more.
 
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I can't see that story having a happy ending, I just want my girls to be happy :meguuusad:
 
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A number of typos and grammar issues in this release, especially with regard to the tenses used.
Can't help but wonder if the snipe meant proofreading was rushed this time.
  1. Page 4: "every monster attack on Hinako were stopped" should be "every monster attack on Hinako was stopped".
  2. Page 6: "I wouldn't mind to kick you out of the this house and enjoy my one-to-one sleepover with Hinako..." should be "I wouldn't mind kicking you out of this house and enjoying my one-on-one sleepover with Hinako...".
  3. Page 7: "had given you a hell of a fight" should likely be "gave you a hell of a fight".
  4. Page 24: "undoubtly" (not a word) should be "undoubtedly".
  5. Page 24: "all of this again" should likely be "all of that again".
  6. Page 32: "I knew you are" should be "I knew you were".
  7. Page 32: "Would you like to stay up with me together tonight?" should either be (A) "Would you like to stay up with me tonight?" or (B) "Would you like to stay up together tonight?".
    (The "stay up with me" makes "together" redundant; it should be one or the other.)
More minor issue:
  • Page 15: the word "text" is randomly floating in the whitespace.

Typographical errors aside, thank you for continuing to translate this.
 
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I can't see that story having a happy ending, I just want my girls to be happy :meguuusad:
In theory, the story will have it; there’s supposed to be a wedding between the two girls haha, it’s just that it will take time to see it. Even though I want it to happen already, it’s nice to know and feel that each chapter that passes makes them love each other more so we can actually see the wedding as something beautiful they’ll have in peace. I just want to see it, yes, and I hope it can be seen that way too.
 
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In theory, the story will have it; there’s supposed to be a wedding between the two girls haha, it’s just that it will take time to see it. Even though I want it to happen already, it’s nice to know and feel that each chapter that passes makes them love each other more so we can actually see the wedding as something beautiful they’ll have in peace. I just want to see it, yes, and I hope it can be seen that way too.
"there’s supposed to be a wedding between the two girls "
Hinako and Shiori ? Also ,how do you know that ?
 
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"there’s supposed to be a wedding between the two girls "
Hinako and Shiori ? Also ,how do you know that ?
The wedding, well, I mean of course Hinako and Shiori xd. I know because of two things: first, the extras from the first volumes that talk about the draft of the more cheerful idea of the two of them getting tired but it being a funnier story. And as I said before, the author on X already made two images of their wedding; the first one was when the last arc and the anime came out, and the second was recently, like a little over a month ago. So that’s why I still want to believe that they will end up like that. I just want to be able to believe it so I can wait a little longer in peace until we finally see real romantic developments between them, just something nicer, I mean.
 

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