...that was fast
I think I'm still going to retranslate chapter one, though
I have absolutely no idea what to do with the names though, so if you have any suggestions for names for the disciples not mentioned in this chapter, I'll stick them in
(And if you have any better ideas for the...
from the wording it sounds like they were maintaining this list before they had actually become affected by the wish
though this is probably just coping from me because i find the "female horomones changed their sexuality" cop-out to be a little rape-y in this instance
it should be he and us all
"both" is only usable when you have specifically 2 objects, whereas since "us" is a plural pronoun, it implies any number of people.
i got really confused for a second there, until i remembered that not every culture writes numbers with periods as the decimal indicator
i was just wondering how exactly that tiara could be hundreds of thousands of dollars