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    Utsushicha Dame-na Kao - Ch. 10 - 배신자

    This was undoubtedly assault, especially considering the power imbalance: age, position (she's essentially her boss and controls every aspect of her life), and the use of light force (holding her in a way that limited her movement). However, there was a noticeable lack of resistance in both...
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    Utsushicha Dame-na Kao - Ch. 10 - 배신자

    저는 이 줄거리가 다른 방향으로 가기를 바랐어요. 순종적인 캐릭터가 항상 강압적인 여자 한 명만 있으면 바람을 피우는 고정관념이 정말 싫어요. 비인간적으로 느껴지거든요. 물론 이야기 속에서 아이가 줏대가 부족하다는 건 분명히 했지만요. I was hoping this plotline would go in a different direction. I really dislike the stereotype of the submissive character who is always one forceful woman away...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 10

    I believe I can shed some light on this. It's important to remember that we're reading this because someone illegally translated it for us. The primary customer base for this story is Korean, and we only know about it because Rangrarii gained fame from her success as the artist of "Bad Thinking...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 10

    What an utterly uninteresting story. It's hard to care about the ending or anything else in it. This was entirely predictable. I didn’t expect any surprises at the end because it’s been obvious for a long time that Rangrari lacks originality and would create the most standard story imaginable...
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    Utsushicha Dame-na Kao - Ch. 7 - Today turned out great

    I love every aspect of this story. I can see so many interesting storylines it could explore further. I hope this will be a longer story because the setting, characters, drama, and eroticism are all top quality.
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 7

    My gut feeling tells me that she genuinely intended for the story to have a viable love triangle and thought that people would be engaged with Lily and Anna's storyline. However, I have never seen a story handle it worse in my life.
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 7

    You're quite right in your assumptions. She wanted to add a cheating plot to "Bad Thinking Diary" because she thought it would be "hot". I don't think Rangrarii understands her audience at all. I honestly believe she created this story thinking it was super hot and sexy because that's what she...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 7

    Even with my extremely low expectations for this story, it still fell short. I'm not surprised. It seems Rangrarii either doesn't care enough to make an effort or lacks the talent to do so. Personally, I think it's more a lack of ability. The story is rushed, shallow, bare-bones, boring, and...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 5

    This was a strange choice for the story. Flashbacks can't make the reader care about a broken relationship when it's already shattered. You can't start caring retroactively when the relationship fell apart before it even had a solid foundation. Why should I, as a reader, care about Lily and...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 4

    I think anyone being honest with themselves can see where this is headed. There's nothing so far to suggest that the author will surprise us in the next chapter. I'll check it out, but I'm not expecting any changes to sway my opinion. I actually fear it will delve even deeper into NTR fetish...
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 4

    I wanted to reply to your insightful message, as I also believe this was a missed opportunity. It's too bad you're not the one writing the story! I think there's an element of wanting readers to see themselves in Lily as this super submissive character who is completely dominated by Rose. After...
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    Finding Assistant Manager Kim - Oneshot

    So, this author can actually make normal stories.
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    Lily of the Valley - Ch. 4

    There’s really not much to add that hasn’t been said about this story. Essentially, it’s predictable, rushed, riddled with clichés, and seems to lack deep character development, catering instead to those who prefer eye-catching illustrations over a substantive plot. One can’t help but feel a bit...
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