Akebi-chan no Sailor Fuku - Vol. 3 Ch. 17 - Here, Your Pompoms.

[MangaDex]

 

[Lithe]

Whoooo-

 

[chusetto]

How I love those motion pages

 

[finalten]

What if you make Gravure book into a manga?

 

[Pnutz]

We are still here

Spoiler

 

[esega]

Thicc or slender, both are guud.

 

[Poke_Eterey]

We came back! :::::3

 

[6mai]

I was about to say that finally a group (combo) appeared that has someone that actually understands Japanese but then I realized he doesn't know what ~じゃないかしら means. The editor still has no qualms about typesetting over art even thought he could avoid it without much trouble and he can't be arsed to do the simplest redraws but that's a minor pet peeve. Well, the silver lining is that this seems to be the best work, and decent work for what it is, that this lovely manga has gotten but I did only compare it with nojay's MTL butchery, so I hope I'm not doing a disservice to the other group combo. Anyway, it's way more effort than what I'm willing to put in it so I hope you take this comment as constructive criticism. Cheers.

 

[dokidoki]

this series is fucking amazing

 

[DrWhoCares]

@6mai I make it a point to avoid re-TLing while PRing, unless it's necessary because I can't figure out what's wrong.
How would you have TL'd the line? I actually PR'd this a while back, but I also mentioned that page was a bit of a mess after rereading it this morning.

Additionally, can you point out some examples of the "The editor still has no qualms about typesetting over art even thought he could avoid it without much trouble and he can't be arsed to do the simplest redraws but that's a minor pet peeve."

 

[marianolinx]

I love the thickness

 

[jinzonam]

All the girls are best girls ;-;

 

[Nakanaki]

this is beautiful 🧐 thanks

 

[6mai]

@DrWhoCares Going of memory here but "Rather than getting worse, perhaps it's just that you've grown" "Like in height and such" "Yeah I totally have blablabla". Or you could read into it more and go with a more liberal line like "Maybe you haven't really gotten worse per se, but rather your body has grown and you just haven't adapted to it". But you would have to shorten the line or the TS would stretch it over the next page as well :^)

As for the other thing just open up raws and scanation side by side and you should see what I mean. Jap text never goes over the art. One example is the first chapter you did, ch13, page one. The redraw thing appears when you clean SFX and just leave it white when you can't cover it with TSing, like this chapter, page 5, the net of the racket.

 

[DrWhoCares]

@6mai
Gotcha.
Unfortunately for you, I'm no typesetter. I'll mention things, but I have no control over the typesetting, I was just asked to proofread, so I don't do any QC post-release, usually.

@Naabii is who you'll want to direct the typesetting criticisms to, since she's the typesetter. I hadn't noticed the cleaning, but not re-typesetting over or redrawing the art, stuff.

It's a fair point.

As for that line in question, as mentioned, I did bring it up after release, but I've been far to busy at my job to handle going back over things, and I'm not in contact with the TL.

Keep on keeping on, bud. Criticisms are always welcome.

 

[FiddlePop]

Thanks for this chapter

 

[DanYHKim]

That was really sweet. Showing such acceptance and encouragement is beautiful.

 

[Serenata]

sleepy girls knows the value of good thicc legs niiiiiiiiiice

AHHHH THE BELLYBUTTONNNNN AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

Page 3 and 4 are gorgeous

 

[gronkle]

How can you seamlessly combine ecchi and wholesomeness? What magic brought forth this manga?

And how can you have so many best girls?

This might be the pinnacle of CGDCT.

 

[THUGDERE]

All the girls are best girls ;-;

^ yes!
also, i need that gif pleaaaaase !