Akuyaku Reijou no Tsuihougo! - Vol. 5 Ch. 23 - A Peaceful Way to Win the Contest

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So they judged it on money earned. Not popularity, which is what they agreed upon. Shame. Missed making an intelligent plot out of it.

Also, date. Date date, not something something excuse that looks like a date. Bluntness is required to combat density.
 
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I really don't like the prince from the other nation. Kinda hope he suffers in some way. His ego needs a beat down. Even if he gave good advice to scared Knight boy

also, she sold shit, so what if it is a yearly deal? It is within the time frame of the sales dates... fuck that bs
 
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Is it me, or scanlation is kinda lousy this time?
Page 4 - "What's wrong with you today?" Sound too aggressive for the context.
Page 5 - KInda weird that ponytail guy first explains what's going on, then goes "Hey! Take a look at this!"
Page 15 - "Her arm".
Page 16 - I feel like some important context was left out. "He said, he didn't, he leaves" - who said?
Page 25 - "Came up", not "came out".
Also a number of typos, wrong tense usages and awkwardly and incorrectly structured sentences all over the chapter.

People paying just to get their hands destroyed, can't say i understand their definition of fun.
Also nuns are now accepting bribes, lol.
 
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Bros so bad at romance that an enemy team had to help him 😭
 
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So they judged it on money earned. Not popularity, which is what they agreed upon. Shame. Missed making an intelligent plot out of it.

Also, date. Date date, not something something excuse that looks like a date. Bluntness is required to combat density.
Actually, money can mirror the popularity of a store/service. While pricing can then affect the results (that one super high priced dress did tip the scale in the end), if the product isn't liked or affordable to most people, there won't be any profit and the store won't be popular. It's more "how much the people liked the service they paid" and less "how much the manager made"... I guess.

They could have go with a popularity poll instead, but that would be "out of place" in a more medieval society.
 
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Um, actually, there's a difference here. Popularity can be something that doesn't benefit the store on its own, but can benefit the town and people better.
Which is why I say "can", I know that raw profite isn't always an accurate way to gauge popularity. But for this kind of contest, it might be the best option, in my opinion anyway.
 
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Which is why I say "can", I know that raw profite isn't always an accurate way to gauge popularity. But for this kind of contest, it might be the best option, in my opinion anyway.
Could've, should've, might've. But it's not what they actually agreed on in this particular contest.
 

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