Akuyaku Reijou Tensei Oji-san - Vol. 4 Ch. 22 - School Festival Arc part 1

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Thanks for the TL, I love the concept for this series so it's great that it's up again.

I agree with Tds that 'Limit' is an awkward sounding choice. Otherwise a well edited MTL.
 
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We appreciate the work. But may I suggest, have you considered adding a proofreader?

Even if you are using Indonesian as base, and don't have original Japanese for context...
...a proofreader with native English background can smooth out inconsistencies in grammar.

The typesetting is great. So adding one step could improve it greatly.
 
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Thanks for the TL! It has some rough spots that could be helped with a proofreader, but it was a great effort!

I, too, like to see beauties crossdress in this situation.
 
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"limit" seems off, but so does "restriction". It sounds like it's more like... "challenge" doesn't seem like quite the word, but it's closer.
 
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Thanks for the chapter... The translation is good, but would you change Majesty into Highness. Because Your/His/Her Majesty is for the reigning rulers means King and Queen, while Highness is for prince and princess. Since they're still both crown prince and prince, it should be Highness.
 
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Ngl, if there was a lady like this Grace in real life, I would be gladly to follow/worship her too given the chance. S/he is just too great, and entertaining :wooow:

And thanks for the effort, although there are a few rough spots, overall it's a decent read. As mentioned by others, I believe adding a proofreader (and maybe a RD) will lift the quality to a new level. Still, I'm glad to see that this manga is still being continued.
 
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thanks for the mtl scan :thumbsup::thumbsup: i'm getting the withdrawals for not reading this for well over 5 months :worry:

why is mc has that stereotypical dadbod and the mom is still so fuckably sexy lmao ngl i'd tap that

mc playing 4k grand strategy with all those "killing five birds with one stone" plan lmao
 
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The daughters of bottom rank nobles, serving as ladies-in-waiting, would be performing some tasks overlapping with those of maids. And there would be absolutely nothing shameful or disgraceful about it.
 
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Thank you for the update!

Because this is from Indonesian translation, I think some local term mixed here, such as KPI, in page 11. I suspect KPI actually "Komisi Penyiaran Indonesia", or "Indonesian Broadcasting Commission".1

KPI notoriously well-know for issuing warning notices to broadcast companies for violate unsuitable for children rules and local cultures violations, such as public kissing2 or simply showing revealing outfits. That is why many broadcast companies resort to self-censorship, sometimes going too far.

Doraemon censorship


Please note: That was not KPI doing, but rather by the broadcast company. Even KPI themself said that the blurring was excessive.


1 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indonesian_Broadcasting_Commission
2 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_display_of_affection
 
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