Kind of dark to see the normally super bubbly Yuri with such a dark look. It seems as if she's trapped in the story, but it repeats constantly. Why is she able to see the literal deus ex machina and know that the world is wrong? Pretty fascinating.
Melissa is causing absolute chaos within the story, and it will be super difficult to get things back on track, especially in a sensible way. It's practically guarenteed that the ending will be different, perhaps a Yuri (heh) ending?