Denjin N - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Ah, so he's the villain here.
I suppose only good way to defeat him is an EMP strike.
 
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Dang. Wonder where's the story gonna go. Pretty nice for a slasher manga. Reminded me of Electro from AS2
 
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The plot is boring but the author is relatively competent, so the execution feels quite nice even tho it's predictable.
 
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Typo on page 6: pedesrians >> pedestrians
Typo on page 16: turnred >> turned
On page 18 instead of "You're lying!!" it would be better to write "You're kidding!!"
Typo on page 16: Kaznaki-san >> Kanzaki-san
 

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