Thanks for the translation!
Some thoughts:
Page 6: I really want that Laius T-shirt, goddammit. Seems like it could be easy to reproduce, if only I had the golden symbol image;
Page 8: Idk why but those plump halflings really make me uncomfortable... probably because up until now we've only seen halflings built like Chilchuck, tall and slender;
Page 9: Senshi's old group being the supreme dad squad, lol. Dwarves are really good at rocking aloha shirts, I'm jealous here;
Page 14: I really went and forgot their names, but the dwarf in Kabru's group looks really good as an elf, damn. The gnome, too, looks a bit like Laios as a human. Mickbell, though, should be glad for landing as a halfling, because he has an awful recessed chin as other races lol;
Page 21: Kuro can talk in a surprisingly more complex manner when speaking in his native language compared to when talking in the common tongue, huh. Makes me think if he's just playing the "numbskull dog" part to please Mickbell.