And the plot is? The punchlines are? Or we just get the pre wanking fantasies of the mc in manga form and just that?
I mean, there are a lot of demand of self fullfillment shit and it's clearly on the rise, but at least put some effort. Hire a writer, make your editor to actually help you out even if he has abandoned all hope after being put after this and things like that. One thing is illustrations where you can do these snippets and do wonders for fap material and other thing is making a full serialization about how big are the bazongas on the women the self insert mc meets and the definetly not creep touchy feely shit he fantazises on. Because if this is slice of life awkward adult virgin edition, it's failing miserably.
Holy shit this is the bottom of the barrel after you scraped the wood.