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This is kind of lackluster writing. "Affinity". I can somewhat guess what it means based on the name. However, it's still an ambiguous term. Affection? Trust? [Lack of] suspicion? Bargaining? Lust? Those could all be part of affinity, and those are all reasonably separate concepts.
Nowhere does it explain what affinity actually is. All we know is that the MC believes that increased affinity [with someone] results in less nagging from them. The story could've added like one speech bubble to explain what it actually is. I'll even give the story the benefit of the doubt and say that the actual definition of affinity is a plot-relevant detail. It could still explain what Haruka believes affinity is without spoiling anything.
Nowhere does it explain what affinity actually is. All we know is that the MC believes that increased affinity [with someone] results in less nagging from them. The story could've added like one speech bubble to explain what it actually is. I'll even give the story the benefit of the doubt and say that the actual definition of affinity is a plot-relevant detail. It could still explain what Haruka believes affinity is without spoiling anything.