I Fell in Love, so I Tried Livestreaming. - Ch. 86 - The Aftermath of the Festival

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Oh wow. . . . . I seriously thought I was gonna be right about Yuu turning Hakua down as well. But Im so glad it seems I was wrong. Looks like confession next chapter?
 
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Oh wow. . . . . I seriously thought I was gonna be right about Yuu turning Hakua down as well. But Im so glad it seems I was wrong. Looks like confession next chapter?
I really hope so, if not I'm gonna riot... 'cause it would really blow if the arc would be only to dump on cat girl and the stretch the series for the confession and not other things to go.
 
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Trash, first girl wins for the 987545th time, are these mangakas even trying to make their manga the slightest bit different from the other millions of manga that follow this same tired formula? Jesus christ.

Also author really made Takane best girl just to Itsuki her at the end like bruh...
 
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NGL i dont remember anything the blondie have ever done in the series, hopefully am just a forgetful person becasue i dont want the "I appeared first so am the one who win" situation.

She had a arc about how she have to be a "good girl" if I am not mistaken because of how her parents died leading to her not being able to be herself but rather keeping a persona.

Also the one that got rejected had even less of a arc, I get why people latch to archtypes but not to the expense of the story as somehow their ship winning is the only thing that matters (not that I am accusing anyone of this yet), Jimi herself also havent done much, Hakua certainly had a higher impact on the story even if Takane have better chemistry with Inuzuka but I suppose is because they are similar in many ways.

First girl wins is because stories have a structure and having a random-ass girl showing up halfway and win is just being contrarian, the very few times it happens it just leaves a bad taste ... sometimes there are obvious leads and other times there aren but in the end its not up to who is first, there is a world of diference of Uruka and Yotsuba, starting how Uruka was the obvious designated loser.
 
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She had a arc about how she have to be a "good girl" if I am not mistaken because of how her parents died leading to her not being able to be herself but rather keeping a persona.

Also the one that got rejected had even less of a arc, I get why people latch to archtypes but not to the expense of the story as somehow their ship winning is the only thing that matters (not that I am accusing anyone of this yet), Jimi herself also havent done much, Hakua certainly had a higher impact on the story even if Takane have better chemistry with Inuzuka but I suppose is because they are similar in many ways.

First girl wins is because stories have a structure and having a random-ass girl showing up halfway and win is just being contrarian, the very few times it happens it just leaves a bad taste ... sometimes there are obvious leads and other times there aren but in the end its not up to who is first, there is a world of diference of Uruka and Yotsuba, starting how Uruka was the obvious designated loser.
I get the point where people would get upset if they introduced a character late in the story and win, but I think a character introduced in the first 10-20% of the manga cant be considered a random-ass girl.

I have enjoyed 2 stories that make the not "first girl he meet wins", but i dont want to spoil it so am going mix some cliche romcom with it :D.
for those who want to spoil themselves, 8 mean first girl win, 9 mean she doesnt
8Miageru to Kimi wa
8Mousou Telepathy
9Ookami Shounen wa Kyou mo Uso o Kasaneru
9Molester Man
815 Minutes 'Til They Actually Start Dating
 
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She had a arc about how she have to be a "good girl" if I am not mistaken because of how her parents died leading to her not being able to be herself but rather keeping a persona.

Also the one that got rejected had even less of a arc, I get why people latch to archtypes but not to the expense of the story as somehow their ship winning is the only thing that matters (not that I am accusing anyone of this yet), Jimi herself also havent done much, Hakua certainly had a higher impact on the story even if Takane have better chemistry with Inuzuka but I suppose is because they are similar in many ways.

First girl wins is because stories have a structure and having a random-ass girl showing up halfway and win is just being contrarian, the very few times it happens it just leaves a bad taste ... sometimes there are obvious leads and other times there aren but in the end its not up to who is first, there is a world of diference of Uruka and Yotsuba, starting how Uruka was the obvious designated loser.
To me, a good writer can have a girl come in halfway through and decelop her well enough to make her a compelling choice.

Most mangaka completely fail at writing.
 

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