Isekai Kaeri no Ossan wa, Fusei Sukiru de Fathercon Musume-tachi o Tororori ni

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@goodhunter while i somewhat agree with what you say, i have to intervene,
yes, its pretty stupid at first, an op low confidence male that get some tiddies cause "skill". Now, it gets better, the plot? future wise, almost nonexistent, plaged by the echii, BUT, the plot past wise? oh oh oh oh the fking best. the only reason i read this is to see when we reach the flash backs,
these are what fuel me.

i would recommend reading the novel, its better paced at last.
 
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I read the novel... This is pretty bad.

Though it does have some funny and cool moments at least. Yep, it’s pretty bad sadly
 
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For those that don't understand what happened with the Viagra part, it's the start of a new subplot. Yeah, I agree it could have been better placed...
1 - Angelica and Ghosts
2 - Some Yakuza kidnapped Rio's brother (Lion King), and wants her body to get him back.
 
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Wow, this is pretty enjoyable, I really like the twist on the generic isekai story.
 
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yup Kraken's translation is ugh giving me a headache, it's like they're creating their own dialogues

Ch.2.1
from the first page alone a lot of add and minus
1st page
What 'apartment'? the raw doesn't even say anything about apartment just his part time job and salary. and they even omitted his name on this line

What 'father'? the raw says his parent not father

'I want to be financially independent', omg they left out the other details it should be something like this
'I wish to be self-reliant economically soon, but I don't have the energy to do so, and ended up being spoiled.'

they also remove the side note 'Filled with Hero-sama's tsukkomi!!'


now here is the worst part
2nd page
'Just how big' the original says
'Two Big Dome'

'what am i thinking?'
'...i wonder if she's thinking the same'

original says
'...what the hell am I thinking?'
yup that's the only thing he said in the raw. where the hell did they get the '...i wonder if she's thinking the same' ?
there's a lot more wrong translation in ch2.1

I'd like to redo the chapters but the redraws will surely kill me.
 

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