Kaguhara-san's Fetish Notebook - Ch. 13 - Pain That's Weaved of Youth

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ok now I'm thinking I messed up how I worded the translation because it definitely wasn't her breasts they were making fun of
Through my 2nd grade reading skill, I could infer they were instead telling her to cover up since she stunk. AwA
 
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The pee panel was absolutely necesary for the plot.
It made emphasis on what really dug into the sisters mind. It's supposed to be a POV for a reason and it really makes a point come across when she said "that dream AGAIN". Which means not only does this memory come back often, but always ends on the note of seeing her sister humiliated and hurt.
 
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all thing's considered, sister probably developed a sadistic piss fetish in that moment which is why she's reliving it...while also clearly being aware of her sister's sweat fetish and using a convoluted plan to make the girls more enticing to her sister
yea the subtle washing machine panel....like did she have a wet dream?
 
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Well, aside from this sidejob series, the author's main output has always been porn with lots of bodily secretions rendered in detailed art, so such fetish leaks over sometimes.
Wait, this author has hentai doujin? I don't believe so since I couldn't find any at all. Do they go with different handle?

edit: nope, I mistook this one with Roten Garden Saga author.
 
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ok now I'm thinking I messed up how I worded the translation because it definitely wasn't her breasts they were making fun of
Idk I think it was fine. I knew immediately what they were conveying about the sweat because well. That's been her insecurity since the beginning lol. Also them flapping the blazer and the mention earlier of it covering smells makes it pretty obvious. Not sure where that person got boobs from lol
 
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"What's new under Staff picks?"

Manga about a girl with a bodily fluid fetish"

"...well fine I'm not fetish shaming"

Starts reading

"Hey that manga is pretty good let's see when can I count with the next update?"

Last update was 4 months ago
"God damnit"
 
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I think they were mocking Akishita because she sweats a lot, right? Like, you should cover yourself with a blazer cuz you smell.

Also, am I the only one who felt uncomfortable with the detail of little Ririka's peeing? Like, the first panel of that page would have been enough, but that second panel zooming in feels too much.
If anything, couldn't that have been a hint to how the older sister is screwed in the head?

She gets a dream that's weirdly focused on the image of her sister soaked in piss and then she has to "wash up" afterwards. I'm thinking that Ririka isn't the only freak in the family.
 

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