Dex-chan lover
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If/when this gets an anime I can see them doing the same thing that they did for oshitnoko and frieren and adapting these 8 chapters in a single extra-long episode
Thank you for taking the time to write these suggestions!Thanks for the chapter!
Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26
- p5 Didn't something black just leave just now...? -> Didn't something black disappear just now...? [or "dissipate" or similar]
- p9 blessed by the curse -> ["blessed" by a "curse" is untypical phrasing, more common would be "affected" by a curse, or similar]
- p13 no matter, where she is in the world -> no matter where she is in the world