King's Concubine

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Thank you for the chapter!
Tbh, I waited for a second chapter before reading the series OTZ
That's what one calls regrett😓😥 please don't drop the series, it is just starting to get good 🤲🙏
 
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Thanks for the hard work, this is interesting.
Please keep it up Demon Queen =)

Alas, i was a bit confused to, the first chapter had some japanese text, is this korean or japanese 😂
 
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Here's some guesses for the names:
Kaaruniru = Carneil or Carnille
Esupekku = Especk
Eruseenuando = Elsainuand
Ruuburittsu = Reubritz
Idisu = Edis or Edith (haha)

It's best to use the usual approximations of things like 'maou', 'makai', etc. instead of writing an explanatory footnote when they're introduced, by the way. It goes a long way in terms of immersion.
 
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I've taken the liberty of adding a simple summary to the page. It's not good to have nothing there since people probably won't read if there's no summary. Feel free to edit it if you can improve it.
 

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