(A bit of a fair warning : I treat the bad story as comedic in of itself, so if you're going in looking for a coherent story, this might not be for you.)
This manga reminds of telenovelas I used to watch as a kid with my grandma and mom 'cause that's what they set the TV to.
The whiplash from a high impact scene in one panel to bonding in another, subjectively poor writing as seen by everyone else's comments, this made me laugh inside and grin back to forth while covering my eyes as I realize how wild the story is. It's so much fun.
There's so much (too much) going on in the story that any mentioning or critique in pace is kind of irrelevamt to me with a story like this. This is that 'so bad it's good' kind of story.
I might give this a 10 😂
Thanks so much for the translation to everyone at Eresh Scans. May God bless you all.