Kouchuugun Shikan Boukensha ni Naru

[Monn12]

It's quite good (the concept, i've read a few books about when someone from superior tech level planet came to more primitive world), but the biggest problem for me would be juvenile romance and harem, not the harem per se but the juvenile part.
Harem is actually good point here. 2 Clones bloodline leading the military, while official queen's bloodline rules the state.
Everyone would be programmed to operate within confines of Anti-Bug Empire.

What bothers me really is the juvenile part since i've read normal books that feature mature people (and thought processes), so seeing my favorite concept infantilized left a bad taste in my mouth.

 

[vodkavodka]

The story was pretty good until chapter 47, then it took a deep nosedive. Which coincides with the moment the original author stopped updating the novel.
It's a shame. I hope the original author will continue the novel someday.

 

[MisterMango]

I paused at 50.1 when the situation with the source material became unclear. How's it going?

 

[KaisarX]

The story was pretty good until chapter 47, then it took a deep nosedive. Which coincides with the moment the original author stopped updating the novel.
It's a shame. I hope the original author will continue the novel someday.

yeah story went from slowly build up + slice of life of sci-fi person meet fantasy, then it hit the hiatus and it just political plot plot plot plot plot non-stop.
it would be easier to end the story as pricess' follower start to gasp MC true existance and sliently in awe of how bigger stage they are in right now(as a first step to protect planet from extinction) as MC conquer world with supieror technology.

Like seriously, conquer world and deverlop it technoloy to fight tyranid seem to be main plot.
not fight some small warlord kingdom that didn't even span continent.

the story seem to intent to take it slow as MC slowly build up his fortress,explain his sci-fi fortess to the local and play political in neighbour kingdom before stike it, then conquer starveek kingdom back.
Not throw everything and have warlord teleport to a forest in 1 chapter. neighbour kingdom declear him traitor in 1 seccond afterward.
just no build up whatever.

you can cleary see clean cut between slice of life web novel take it slow and manga ramp up plot so they can end it all.

 

[Gerdinnyo]

You know, since "I am a spider, so what?" I can't look at characters such as this MC. If you truly want to save the lives of everyone at "any cost", then do so. Become a tryant, a manipulator, whatever, but stick to your conviction. Be like the Pope from "I am a spider". Take on the burden of being a bad person for the sake of the survival of others. Don't half ass it and make excuses like "I don't want to force them to do this or that." Brainwash them mf. Brainwash everyone. And after 3 generations you are going to have your technology. And then you can stop brainwashing. And they can decide for themselves. You have to think about morals AFTER you have saved them, because you have already decided that you are not going to adhere to your own morals and guidelines. Don't pretend that you are doing everything in your power to save them, if you are not.