Kouchuugun Shikan Boukensha ni Naru

[Monn12]

It's quite good (the concept, i've read a few books about when someone from superior tech level planet came to more primitive world), but the biggest problem for me would be juvenile romance and harem, not the harem per se but the juvenile part.
Harem is actually good point here. 2 Clones bloodline leading the military, while official queen's bloodline rules the state.
Everyone would be programmed to operate within confines of Anti-Bug Empire.

What bothers me really is the juvenile part since i've read normal books that feature mature people (and thought processes), so seeing my favorite concept infantilized left a bad taste in my mouth.

 

[vodkavodka]

The story was pretty good until chapter 47, then it took a deep nosedive. Which coincides with the moment the original author stopped updating the novel.
It's a shame. I hope the original author will continue the novel someday.

 

[MisterMango]

I paused at 50.1 when the situation with the source material became unclear. How's it going?

 

[deleted-user-8bc522726c]

The story was pretty good until chapter 47, then it took a deep nosedive. Which coincides with the moment the original author stopped updating the novel.
It's a shame. I hope the original author will continue the novel someday.

yeah story went from slowly build up + slice of life of sci-fi person meet fantasy, then it hit the hiatus and it just political plot plot plot plot plot non-stop.
it would be easier to end the story as pricess' follower start to gasp MC true existance and sliently in awe of how bigger stage they are in right now(as a first step to protect planet from extinction) as MC conquer world with supieror technology.

Like seriously, conquer world and deverlop it technoloy to fight tyranid seem to be main plot.
not fight some small warlord kingdom that didn't even span continent.

the story seem to intent to take it slow as MC slowly build up his fortress,explain his sci-fi fortess to the local and play political in neighbour kingdom before stike it, then conquer starveek kingdom back.
Not throw everything and have warlord teleport to a forest in 1 chapter. neighbour kingdom declear him traitor in 1 seccond afterward.
just no build up whatever.

you can cleary see clean cut between slice of life web novel take it slow and manga ramp up plot so they can end it all.

 

[Gerdinnyo]

You know, since "I am a spider, so what?" I can't look at characters such as this MC. If you truly want to save the lives of everyone at "any cost", then do so. Become a tryant, a manipulator, whatever, but stick to your conviction. Be like the Pope from "I am a spider". Take on the burden of being a bad person for the sake of the survival of others. Don't half ass it and make excuses like "I don't want to force them to do this or that." Brainwash them mf. Brainwash everyone. And after 3 generations you are going to have your technology. And then you can stop brainwashing. And they can decide for themselves. You have to think about morals AFTER you have saved them, because you have already decided that you are not going to adhere to your own morals and guidelines. Don't pretend that you are doing everything in your power to save them, if you are not.

 

[Nodens]

This story reminds me so much of Mutineers Moon by David Webber, just with a isaeki fantasy world instead of earth. It’s got so many shared points in setting I sorta wonder if the LN author read it back in the day. It’s a really old book, so not impossible.

 

[grom]

Welp, story will be stopped because the actual LN stopped/interrupted even before the point the manga is in. The mangaka is trying to make a good ending and not a brutal axing. :/

 

[Calibvrn]

mhm mhm i c i c

 

[zHIST]

It's not horrible yes, but it's just so incredibly boring. The premise is interesting but the tropes are not.

I barely got through the first 10 chapters and it seems it somehow manages to get worse in the future.

Author clearly is incapable to sticking to his initial premise and staying within the lines pf what is actually interesting to read and ends up building up something incredibly generic.

 

[Reisawaaaaaa]

Sometimes I felt there a Conflicts Regression, what I mean is the main plot is Surviving the war against the Space Bug Swarm, that's almost Galaxy to Universal level threat. But so far the conflict is so tame and barely mention that Bug, rather the story often more focussed on Mythical or Metaphysical aspects on this planet such as Magic, God and Religion. As if they testing MC faith for the Empire and their Advanced Science and Technology.

Also cancer plot is came out of nowhere, it's looks like they want some dramatic moments and limiting MC movements so the world could move on itself. It is understandable if everyone know the truth about Incoming Invader, but none of them know Except his wife, which make this Manga if cut without context looks like your average Fantasy manga.

And some of people in this comment section Actually sees the same, Politics again ada again, Plot plot plot. What politics gonna do if Those bug Slaughtered people on this planet, None.. which come to my First point, Conflict Regression. From Sci-fi to Mere Fantasy.