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goof in page 26 : the monocle is back on his eye . he dropped it in the garden in page 17 .
i can only think of 1 explaination : after meeting fon shen , he goes out to the garden to search for the monocle , then he goes back in the room to watch over fon shen again , lol .
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about the plot hole :
i heard that :
in the web novel , fon shen is already dead before rakan returns from his 3-years campaign . everyone tells him the truth that she is dead .
in the light novel : the author retcons this plot to fon shen is still alive , granny is the only one who tells him that she is dead , out of spite .
but this retcon creates a plot-hole : for 10+ years , other peoples ( mao mao , rakan 's uncle , mei mei , other courtesans , ..... ) dont even bother to tell rakan that fon shen is still alive .
this plot-hole is so big that the author doesnt even bother to explain it , lol .
i can only think of 1 explaination : after meeting fon shen , he goes out to the garden to search for the monocle , then he goes back in the room to watch over fon shen again , lol .
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about the plot hole :
i heard that :
in the web novel , fon shen is already dead before rakan returns from his 3-years campaign . everyone tells him the truth that she is dead .
in the light novel : the author retcons this plot to fon shen is still alive , granny is the only one who tells him that she is dead , out of spite .
but this retcon creates a plot-hole : for 10+ years , other peoples ( mao mao , rakan 's uncle , mei mei , other courtesans , ..... ) dont even bother to tell rakan that fon shen is still alive .
this plot-hole is so big that the author doesnt even bother to explain it , lol .