Magic Artisan Dahlia Wilts No More - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.2

[Juice89]

Glad the Tobias bs is outta way!

In comparison to the alternative, which focuses on her interactions with future people and jumps into it, this one builds a nice foundation to her motives and plot. Plus, it focuses on the logistics of her magical items and the fantasy world. Go Dahliya, don’t hang you head any more!

 

[KajurN]

This is just a poorly written mess. Zero buildup continuous timeskips and a continuous exposition dump. Tobias is introduced out of nowhere, things don't get explained properly, he gets engaged to her for god know what reason, her dad (in an out of character way) pressures her into marriage and she bows down and accepts everything like in her previous life then her dad dies suddenly without explanation and Tobias's parents too, then Tobias wants to have the house to live with his new woman because of course

It's clear the story was supposed to start with her after divorce. Trying to cram all of her life up to that point in two chapters had no other result than it being a mess, these are two terrible chapters.

 

[wakamo]

Such a bad chapter to start on you expect people to just accept this mess well no wonder it died so quickly.

 

[Kaitensatsuma]

So he drove her into a corner then acted like a surprised Pikachu when she took it to heart