Maou-sama no Machizukuri! ~Saikyou no Dungeon wa Kindai Toshi~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - War

[MangaDex]

 

[stilgar]

Add another to the harem

 

[wahyurockajn]

=w=) well i already read the novel and can't wait to see her shock expression seeing how procell defeat her =w=)~~

 

[monkey123]

@wahyurockajn
Put it into spoiler tag.

 

[VincentYamato]

I hate that the same author of that piece of shit healing magician wrote this

 

[Med1um]

@monkey123

Basically

Spoiler

his dungeon will be several kilometres long tunnel without any obstacles, and in the end of this are golems that wield heavy machineguns. Entire passage is deathzone from hell.
And all 3 of his floors are the same.

 

[mahtan]

@VincentYamato
Your hate for the healing hero is obtuse, he is the way he is because of the circunstances presented to him and what he has done so far had a porposite....
While the story is a bit hard to swallow at times but it is not bad.

 

[Fuko]

CRUSH YOUR ENEMIES
SEE THEM DRIVEN BEFORE YOU
HEAR THE LAMENTATIONS OF THEIR WOMEN

 

[AbuHajaar]

GMod - the Isekai

 

[Reine]

well, one thing for sure, if you hate it, don't read it lel............ i enjoy these kind of manga tbh :3

 

[Operatix]

built up!

 

[Crosonical]

"It's now's the time to should filter out who's your ally and who's not"

I'm perfectly fine with the release being pushed back a day if it means there's more editing than none at all.
I get what's trying to be said, but it really takes me out of the moment when I come across sentences that bad.

 

[Wolvenworks]

@Crosonical yeah sounds like the proofreader didn't have enough coffee and slept thru that line. i've done some proofreading before, so i'd go with "you should start identifying which ones are your allies and which ones are your enemies". of course, this is completely done with me not knowing the actual source material, so it might actually be completely wrong.

 

[Tokyoweeb]

Im really sorry For my lack of proofing, my mistakes usually come from rewording sentences from scratch and then clicking the undo button @Wolvenworks @Crosonical

 

[Crosonical]

@Tokyoweeb Yeah, I can see that happening. I'm sure I would make the same mistake from time to time. If I have any advice it's that you shouldn't be afraid to spend more time on it. If you have to let it sit for a day before coming back and giving the script another look through, then I'm sure we would all be fine with it.
Thanks for the effort though, it's still a lot better to read this than some of the other "translations" that pop up on this site.

 

[Wolvenworks]

@Crosonical @Tokyoweeb agreed. have seen really bad-quality scanlations, but the perfectionist in me does get triggered quite easily when he sees avoidable typos

 

[Unadon]

Uh if there is any of the translator here...Strauss isn't Strauss. It's Stolas. One of the 72 demons of Ars Goetia. The demon lords in this novel used the name from Ars Goetia.

 

[Darkmeep]

Wow just like that!!

 

[The5thSeraph]

So the dungeons exist to harvest emotions.

Best idea: Pub + Brothel. WENCHES AND MEAD.