Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jul 25, 2019
- Messages
- 105
It kind of falls off. Another commenter said it best. This story is like a disk, all edge and no point. The MC is a 2 dimensional character without any kind of growth or personality.
He does not have a reason behind any of his actions good or bad. The MCs actions are not that of a character but just a vehicle to move the plot, if you could even call it a plot along.
2/10 started off strong but fell off after it failed to develop it's world/story/ or characters or even a reason to care.
He does not have a reason behind any of his actions good or bad. The MCs actions are not that of a character but just a vehicle to move the plot, if you could even call it a plot along.
2/10 started off strong but fell off after it failed to develop it's world/story/ or characters or even a reason to care.