Like Dreydom already mentioned your typesetting is way of, ugly to read. Maybe you could use fonts similar to the previous chapters. Translation is good, maybe a little different phrasing/words could be better but it's ok as it is.
Personally i would like to have the page description also translated e.g like you did on the first page (top right).
But my biggest concern would be the timing, someone could blame you for sniping. 2 weeks waiting is not very long, the previous group is active and didn't mention any drop, in fact they have announced some waiting time. It could be nice if you and the other group get in contact.