Okay so the mc will use a lot of references and fourth wall breaks to force comedy? I don’t know how I feel about that just yet. Also that politician/governor is straight up evil. I know she wants him to be a hero again (probably because he wants to), but the goal is to find that other girl from their party, and from the way she (politician/governor) sounded, the sooner he finds her the better. So why freeze his bank account (denying him his hard earned money) and make him such a low rank adventurer? That’s just going to take up time and if the other girl is actually in danger, increase the chance of her dying. Oh, and that tearful goodbye at the end. She had just met him, I don’t see what she was referring to when she called him an idiot (for using his money? He already explained he doesn’t need any and a good plan. For leaving town? How is leaving a town you just got to make you an idiot?). Plus, it would have just made a lot more sense if she went with him as a traveling merchant. More opportunity for comedy and story, and he clearly needs new friends/companions and she deserves to get to know him better (it’d help develop both their characters). Overall a good start, but for 70 pages, I can’t say it makes me want to pay money to read the next chapter (I know we aren’t; I mean if I was in Japan and just picked this up; basically I can’t say this does it’s job).