Multiverse no Watashi, Koishite Ii desu ka? - Ch. 1 - Two of Myself

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ALRIGHT, HERE WE GO! I really hope that this gets more chapters, i'd love it tbh. This feels very promising and is an interesting change on the "choose your gf/wife" genre. I'm looking forward to possibly readingmore and will be keeping close tabs on it!
 
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Even though it was good, I preferred how the oneshot executed it compared to this chapter. Compared to the oneshot, it feels a bit weird for her to save Jogo and then say "I'm your girlfriend" later on when she just met this Jogo. Still excited to see when Miyato meets her alt self.
Yeah it was pretty sad like when she asks him if he liked her, and wanting to hear him say it. Like she never really heard it from the Jogo that saved her. I thought the oneshot was waay better, it was gonna be more of a mystery and also him going to her house and confessing was cute
 
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I'm excited, but I do think the oneshot's differences made it a more interesting setup. I want the girls to know about each other and I don't want the author to ruin a good idea with any forced melodrama later.
 
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Eh? No? All timelines exist together, get outta here with this "since he didn't die, that timeline no longer exists" type shit. Better yet, she's not in that timeline, so no biggie if it doesn't exist anymore, because she doesn't exist in that timeline she exists here in this timeline.

Also don't tell Miguel.
 
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I like the one-shot’s “reveal” better at the vending machine - it was a more abrupt tone shift and piqued my interest more - but I understand things needed to be changed in order to create a serialization out of the premise, thus the stakes must be raised. It’s still a neat concept, hopefully it doesn’t become liquid ass like Nisekoi.
 
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I'll leave this comment for my future self to see when he revisit chapter 1 again uhehehe. Serialization LETSS GOO!!!
 
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jogoat is back, stand proud you are nah id win as the man who left everything behind and his overwhelming intensity im you
 
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The oneshot was MILES better. Whoever this new editor is just made a unique premise into generic crap.
 

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