Nazeka Shitattekureru Gyaru - Vol. 1 Ch. 10

[Junomano]

It would probably have gone over better if author spent an entire chapter showing Kiyokawa suffering and regretting what she did before Arise felt bad and forgave her. It's on the author for jumping straight into the Arise forgiving Kiyokawa scene after spending the last few chapters showing Kiyokawa messing with Arise.

agreed, lot of stuff was skipped

 

[StandFab]

 

[GranEschaton]

Full chapter to send it off nice. Simple and Clean, they upgraded form otaku and gyaru to couple and the villain didn't even need to kill herself on someone's desk. It's what I expected from a quick read

 

[DaBlackMamba]

Wow, I might be exaggerating, but this might have been one of the worst written things I've seen in a while. I get it's supposed to be a short story but holy shit, this felt like it was AI generated or something.

 

[Magnus_Prime]

This was good; not every manga has to be 100+ chapters.

 

[zephyroths]

since this is short, I don't think this stupid drama need to happen in the first place

 

[NekoiNemo]

E-eh, feels kinda forced... I was expecting more than the "i'm Crrrrrraaaaazzzzyyyy biiiiittttcchhhh!" from the villain and "you force me by saying you'd kill yourself, even though i knew you wouldn't, but i still flollowed your orders" from the MC...

 

[Trolliconics]

Doing the whole "he was forced to say all those mean things" stick at the end is such a boring and noncommittal cop out
Made me less invested in the ending overall
Made everything feel pointless honestly
Nothing really changed and no one really grew
Feels like such a waste of a good premise

 

[Eternalsleep]

 

[Dul01]

Noo i want this is a bit longer about their relationship

 

[Malta]

Booooo, that was lame

 

[ThatGuyScifi]

Well it wasn't nearly as unhinged as I thought it would end up being. I don't know if that's a point for or against it.

Still kind of at how gyaru girl changing her hair color and adding glasses threw the MC off for a good minute. She's wasn't exactly pulling a Clark Kent / Superman move there...

 

[JustALolicon69]

wtf

 

[beanbeanbean]

nah fuck off

 

[Kaito57]

Meh, I saw worst : my only disappointement is Arise forgiving someone who actually tried to get her arrested !

At least, give us the Hentai Extra Ending, Author !!

 

[aa11bb]

Maybe the omake can help?

 

[ZorexLudwin]

I won't kill you anymore MC, i'm sorry

 

[xanon]

All wrapped up with a pretty bow.

 

[jetslose]

the entire plot happens in this one chapter

 

[ArcLife]

Uno reverse