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- Aug 8, 2018
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a highly problematic story that should serve as a cautionary tale for stage type world building
first, why everyone refer to as sama, surely someone higher ranked, also, why is everyone so dumb, I mean they're about 10 not retarded, also nicole is a girl's name, katarina Russian and they're Euro-ambiance, Keith is too modern
I highly doubt that tiny girl is strong enough to ax door down in 1 blow when I, a strapping, 6'3" sophont albeit much taller than I am wide and thud proportionally weaker much like my fish namesake have to flop several times at least to break the door and even then not even cleanly all fallen down just sort of split from the hatchet specifially designed for wood chopping not like that battle axe of claes
how is everyone visiting each other and leaving for the night when there's only these damn horses to travel... are their noble estates like 3 feet squared each?
there is also 0 sign keith love nicole I mean not even some thing to comedically misinterpret as per usual this is just dumb now
first, why everyone refer to as sama, surely someone higher ranked, also, why is everyone so dumb, I mean they're about 10 not retarded, also nicole is a girl's name, katarina Russian and they're Euro-ambiance, Keith is too modern
I highly doubt that tiny girl is strong enough to ax door down in 1 blow when I, a strapping, 6'3" sophont albeit much taller than I am wide and thud proportionally weaker much like my fish namesake have to flop several times at least to break the door and even then not even cleanly all fallen down just sort of split from the hatchet specifially designed for wood chopping not like that battle axe of claes
how is everyone visiting each other and leaving for the night when there's only these damn horses to travel... are their noble estates like 3 feet squared each?
there is also 0 sign keith love nicole I mean not even some thing to comedically misinterpret as per usual this is just dumb now