what do you mean? Did I do a bad job?
tbh its an alright tl
page 3 should be "you used level consumption didn't you?" the "too haven't you" is nonsensical
page 5 it should be stats in plural and the seems should be seem and the "you'd start leveling up like a breeze right" should probably be "you are going to be leveling up like crazy, right?"
page 6 the bro and "I should be the one who gets to worry" feels awkward, should also be "lend me a hand" instead of help
page 8 "no use when broken on the surface" should probably be "nothing happens when..."
page 10 its killed and steered because past tense, also missing a coma and a question mark for the "probably haven't, right?", also steered instead of steer
page 11 missing question mark on the "then what?"
page 12 "the truly pitiful one are not you" is scuffed english, should be "you weren't the truly pitiful one" followed by "it was them"
page 13 "like on of them" should just be "like them"
page 16 should be "didn't you" instead of the haven't
this is the main stuff I found while going through it
main thing is that you don't seem to be a native english speaker and your level of english isn't that good so most of the mistakes are just stuff that ends up being harder to understand in a unique way, very different from something tled by google