Saikyou de Saisoku no Mugen Level Up ~Sukiru [Keiken-chi 1000-bai] to [Level Free] de Level Jougen no Kase ga Hazureta Ore wa Musou Suru~ - Ch. 48 - …

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Kaori-chan's reaction to medal is cute.
I… totally forgot what this one was about, like I never read it at all in the first place…
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So don't even bother.
 
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What are the rings the MC's wearing on the page that he's flying and meet up with Iso? Was it part of his clothes to keep the sleeves down? Or something else?
It's tan girl's bow that he borrowed during the tournament, I guess he doesn't have to return it.
 
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For a minute i thought the tan girl had another guy she liked besides the MC
 
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Do ya'll need a native English PR?
You guys do a bunch of series that I enjoy.. but reading what's put out makes me feel like I'm having a stroke..

There are the obvious things that people have brought up already, but P7 ".. And congratulate on your victory" is one that could have easily been spotted... Congratulations or even shortening it to Congrats would have made it flow so much better. In addition, same page.. "It's been forever since I feel so alive" could be changed from "I feel" to "I've felt" or "I have felt."

Again, just minor things, but having to re-read a bubble 2-3x to try to better understand the meaning throws off the whole flow of reading.
 

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