Seikishi no Ore ga suki ni natta heroine ga zokuzoku to Aitsu no Harem member ni natte shimaundakedo Ore no Nani ga Ikenai noka Dareka Oshiete kure!!

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Yes the WN is still ongoing. I enjoyed it but there are some glaring plot holes that bothered me. Hopefully they are plugged up in the manga version.

The main story is complete there is still more going on after the hero situation is resolved
Honestly the author just end it already after chapter 8. The story it's not exciting after what happen to Ryuguin the Fake Hero. And title is not relevant anymore.

Latest chapter in WN is quite boring

After Hero's punishment, Ichiro the Holy Knight and all party members decide to part away.
Angelica become teacher in royal academy. Eris still stay with Ichiro as disciple. Meanwhile Mika decide travel to many place where people still suffering from Ryuguin's foolishness.
Ichiro doesn't like the idea where they probably never meet again decide to give them a bracelet for instant teleportation. After that they make reunion party in Ichiro's home a mountain hut. On that night a romantic moment Ichiro with his girlfriend. He make promise to save her when something is happening to her and ready to suicide if he can't.

He will make sure find a jewel that bring him back to Japan and introduce his girlfriend to his family.
 
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Lmao this is complete garbage. Reading the spoilers and it's so boring.
I wish I was the hero so I could ntr bitch ass MC.
 
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Shield Hero but even less interesting. What motivates an author to write such crap?
 
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Moral of the story: don't become attached to any girl who happens to walk your way simply because she's there.
 
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idk why this manga is rated so low, this is actually funny as shit (as long as you dont take the mc’s love life that seriously)
 
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i hope the scantalators dont get discouraged by people’s reactions, i actually want to see more of this
 
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Hero has a hidden skill that makes all the MC achievements appear their own, it's why MC keeps getting cucked.
If you're wondering how this manga's premise even works, the spoiler above is how. It's NTR.
Seems like mind control to me.
 
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If I wanted to feel awful I may as well just jump out a window instead of reading more of this.
 
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What motivates an author to write such crap?
The Motivation
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TheRisingRoad, #33, #38 and #41

Let me responds to these posts of yours.
(I will also quote these who indirect portray what I wanna say. If you are one of them: Sorry if you got tagged. You dont need to reply if you dont want to)

First: Thank you for the info. Some sources I looked into had conflicting statements and I think you only mistyped about MC finding new Heroines, speaking it reads like there will be multiple BUT in reality (as the description of this :poop: manga itself AND original website says), he will end up with just a single one.
Second: You are right. Now that you mention it, "Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou" is very similar, with the main difference you mentioned BUT: It had a complettly different flow and focus:
  • Both based on Webnovels
  • Both are finished (main story)
  • Yes, in both MC got cucked bsc "plot".
  • Yes, in both MC leaves the Party to move forward
  • Yes, in both the "Revenge"(?) is almost only shown through the main difference between MC and the antoganists
"true" character to such a comical example that even him (antoganist) getting killed off/"punished" in the end (if both has this end) AND in a such ludicrous (From the Web novel), it wont be satisfying for many because of simple reasons:
  • That they all fucked the antoganist and cucked the MC with this action, hence they are for many not seen as Heroines anymore and will either be seen as just plot devices with no real chance for any redemption at this point AND no focus in the story anymore.
  • Since there lies a difference between beeing betrayed, or getting cucked. One is more redeemable then the other.
  • As people tend not to mind when they are doing it (from the MC perspective), then being the one who happend to it, no matter how the story tries to bends over itself to outweight the good from the bad.

Aka:
that's... rather boring. i had hoped that those 3 used goods would suffer some consequence😒
Lmao this is complete garbage. Reading the spoilers and it's so boring.
I wish I was the hero so I could ntr bitch ass MC.

With the main difference in "Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou":
  • MC moves on right from the very first chapter and dosent sulk after it
  • MC dosent get cucked after that point
  • MC starts to get this own Harem pretty early, which are "Pure"
  • MC focus is on his own Harem girls

While in this :poop: manga:
  • MC dosent move on, as he keeps on sulking through the "story"
  • MC gets cucked through the whole "story", time after time, after every each Love Interest until the very last part where he finds his "Pure" Dream girl
  • MC dosent get a Harem
  • MC focus is on his Dream girl

Aka:
These things are either 90% suffer porn and 10% revenge porn (this) or 10% suffer porn and 90% revenge porn(something like redo of the healer), it's the distasteful handling of 'suffering' I personally dislike.

What makes it 'porn' is beyond the potency or explicitness of the subject rather when it is reduced to a spectacle that cares less about telling a story or sending a message but rather more to stimulate the reader/audience with the subject (positive or negative).

Scenes serving purely for shock value falls under this, and if you think about it even fluffy romance stories that doesn't build up to anything but "sweet moments" would fall under that.

It is not worthless, there are people who like that sort of thing, don't think too much about the story but how reading the story makes you feel in the moment (A valid way to enjoy media). For that, I'm sure these kinds of stories are thrilling. But to me, these stories leave an unpleasant aftertaste no matter the "good ending" - and nothing to chew on but a pile of shit.

Mind you I didnt read both the novels, only the manga so we dont really know how big or little the original gets adapted or changed to fit it more with the audience since in your own post #41 you mentioned the "cuck" phase (which was the whole "story" in the webnovel) shortend up within 8 chaps. I cant confirm it but I dont see any reason not to believe you. And also as you mentioned:
The story it's not exciting after what happen to Ryuguin the Fake Hero
(Since this was the whole focus in the webnovel)
And title is not relevant anymore.
because the "redemption arcs" were also shorten as much as possible(?) but also no Harem exists in this Story since:
He will make sure find a jewel that bring him back to Japan and introduce his girlfriend to his family.
Third. I know what you mean when you say about hoping somehoe it having a Harem end, but honestly speaking it would be as cheap AND bad for both mangas when it happend because of the previous point I made. Sure, not everyone things like that BUT many Harem fans do, which sadly this :poop: Manga is marketed and tagged as.

Hence in this story the (at least for now from the RAWs I heard) focus on a single girl now and the rest gets forgotten. While in the other MC was focused on his new, good life with his new, "Pure" waifus in his harem.

However I will mention that I also dropped "Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou", but for different reasons. You mentioned it before but in ch. 22 the MC forgive them but also seems like(?) she gets into his harem too(?), which made many people angry because and for my part, made him weak as a male protagonist...in a Harem story... and no matter how bad the excuse or "guilt trip" a Love Interest has how the story bends the Character knowing "She never did it from her true self" bullshit excuse, many see them just as something what cant be redeemed anymore.

Otherwise you hadnt these comments there, you wouldnt have this comments here, you wouldnt see the extreme rating difference but also every Pornhwa who had a main love interest having "unvoluntary" had sex with the antagonist would be seen from the perspective the MC has in this manga from now on.

Perhaps some people will see it as a dumb take, but lets not forget we talking about a Harem manga here where such stuff never end well for obvious reasons.
Anyway, rant over lol.
 
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so this had decent ratings so I read the only the descriptions so I said anyways I like revenge mangas if it have first chapter ntr Idk just skip that part but when I read spoilers and figured out there is mostly NTR. I'm asking why it has such high rantings, how sick in the head you must be to like this stuff this is question to people that rate this more than 1/10. and second question does japanese have that in DNA to like NTR or is because they have low libido? Or is it propaganda from japanese government to just have kids, ntr, rape or whatever just to have kids?
Like bruzilu said its mostly for getting attention when you lack writing skills. The other big part is the Author, or fans its being catered to, enjoy getting cucked and want to see it more. In both ways most of the times its a money printer since Asian countries love, and I mean LOVE this :poop:.

While I may make fun of them when I throw them into the same cliche of being countries of cucks, its not really the case. But you also cant ignore the fact that the top big marketing tags in Korean AND Japan is "NTR", which is always "Netorare" or "Netorase", with "Netori" being the lesser know since it has a complettly different focus and targeting group despite being labeled as the same.

Now if you mean this question honestly, well, then its a bit harder to answear. Basically ask yourself: Who is more "manly" ?
  • A guy who has many girls around worshiping him and are exclusive to him
  • A guy who jerks of by watching his wife being railed by a 10 Black dude in a Hotel every weekend

Who has more self respect who got cheated on by his Wife/GF, despite still having some feelings for her?
  • A guy moves on and focus on his new life
  • A guy who forgives her only to let it happen again in secret

Etc, Etc

You would be surprised how much cucks we have here in the west too, tho many will say there are many reasons like low testosterone, bad eating habits, lack of sunlight or out right woke agenda. But Asian Culture is different from us and mostly its Work related. Dont want to go into full detail since I already wrote this damn god rant, but many just work to live a unhappy life how society got and the only relief they get is through, well, this and porn lol. And the more you consum the more it becomes "blant" or "boring", so some of them develop :poop: taste like "NTR"

A Bayesian score of 4.1, this is the lowest score on Mangadex that I've ever seen.
Its a 3.60 now :dogkek:

And here I thought "The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way"
was holding the crown lol. Welp, probably as to do with the fact that about like more then half of the people dont know what happend in the Fanbox :pepela:
 
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A comment that I found from Facebook, shoutout to Bambang Ariwibowo for reading the novel

Huge Spoiler ahead


i'll tell you what happened.
(including spoiler from WN. read at your own risk, or get away)
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basically : the duce beg hero (Ryuguin) have a skill and smart enough to hid it and use it as means for brainwashing every female/heroines around MC (Yamada)
it's so meticulously well prepared process and precise series step of suggestions to actually make those heroines to completely forgot about Yamada and his achievement, so far as obeying all duce bag hero said (3 heroines are getting violated in bed to)
furthermore, duce bag hero and his harem, bullying Yamada to the point he got a severe and serious mental, health, physical damage.
so severe that he forgot how to move.
Journey to revenge is loooooong and painful.
in the end...
the author makes all the heroines (who snapped out of the duce bag hero charm) get their "remorse" put in detail.
and it's something readers could finally said "yeah f u all, btch!!" "f off used garbage"
(but Yamada is too kind as expected of holy knight)
And ultimately. the most satisfying part is the duce bag hero's punishment.... and he will not able to utilize his schlong ever again (including any desire and luxury as even mere living thing)
forced to clear every dungeon that Yamada have cleared (with difficulty level : myth)
the duce bag stuck on first dungeon without ever have a mili atom of courage to face even first floor boss.

*but first and foremost. behind all Yamada's great recovery from his vegetable state, there's one very best girl in the whole story.
she's the only one for Yamada.
and she's OP even her shikigami is enough to beat all "charmed" heroines into submission.
Man the mfs who sit in the studio making this type of stuff need an anvil to fall on they head on some looney tunes ish
 
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So basically its all NTR also semi-spoiler below

tl;dr The pay off doesn’t cover the overhead

The overall consensus from past comments is that; there is a pay off at the end but the suffering the reader is dragged through makes it so that the payoff is lacking.
 
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Jesus fuqing christ, 3.51 ratings (As of 28/04/24 12:49PM UTC+0). That's within bottom 10, hot damn. We've been trying to get Tsuihou Suru Gawa no Monogatari into bottom 10 for months on end now, but it's still bottom 13. Now it's 14th. I never would've imagined such hot rotten garbage would just up and suddenly make that goal so far out of reach. But ig you can't hold a candle on just an absolute steaming pile of hot trash like this one. But if ya'll want to make your blood boil after this one, I suggest Tsuihou Suru gawa no Monogatari. And while you're there, please rate it 1 star so we can at least compete with this one. rn it's at 4.01. Thanks.
 
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Jesus fuqing christ, 3.51 ratings (As of 28/04/24 12:49PM UTC+0). That's within bottom 10, hot damn. We've been trying to get Tsuihou Suru Gawa no Monogatari into bottom 10 for months on end now, but it's still bottom 13. Now it's 14th. I never would've imagined such hot rotten garbage would just up and suddenly make that goal so far out of reach. But ig you can't hold a candle on just an absolute steaming pile of hot trash like this one. But if ya'll want to make your blood boil after this one, I suggest Tsuihou Suru gawa no Monogatari. And while you're there, please rate it 1 star so we can at least compete with this one. rn it's at 4.01. Thanks.
Lol I actually did the first chapter of that one too but stopped cus felt like no one liked it and were too focused on est getting cucked and self inserted too hard so they gave low rating. It's a decent story but people can't get over that hurdle I'm afraife.

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I stopped reading this because you didn't mention the huge difference between the two. One being an isekai and the dude is alone in another world while the other is a pretty established adventurer who even without cheats could move on normally. Also he did sulk he just got broken powers unlike the MC in this one who had to work for his strength. This dude is here alone and is getting traumatized. Japanese protagonists and their self esteem issues am I right.Also spoiler here
last I read he got a two for one with main girl and her friend. The sword saint never fucks the hero. That is also part of the reason I'm fine with her for the most part. Besides the oath or w.e that was placed in her the hero wasn't interested in her body.
 
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Yooo, this manga make you experience how its feel like to be a miserable cuck in an isekai. This is crazyyyyyyyyyyyyy


Fr tho whats wrong with japanese? Why these genre is popular? If its the manga version of novel then this novel must be decent popular right?
 

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