- 3 pages of just text, whew. I know it's to save time from having to draw one-time characters, but there should've been some shots of simple drawn people or silhouettes to make it interesting to read. Sorry, just something to think about as a comic artist.
- I love that Wakana has his own goal AND that it conflicts with Marin's. That's a great setup that I should've occurred to me from the start right there.
- Interrupted by phone, groan. JUST effing say it, good god.
- I think that's the girl that called his doll making girly? She's either gonna be a false "love interest" (because we all know Marin's gonna win), or she'll at least say sorry. At worst and more likely, she's gonna start shit with the dolls/cosplay/romance, intentionally or not. I was expecting her to appear in the future though, so her timing is just perfect for causing trouble... and she's already doing that by unintentionally interrupting them!
I agree on those takes honestly
The potential for forced drama with the girl is kind of annoying specially cause we know Marin’s going to win so there’s no real need for it, but, could always just be her apologizing and or just well played out drama that fleshes out a character
The conflicting goals is a nice touch
As for the phone interruption cliche, yeah, cmon just finish the sentence, that cliche is a horrible one and the only thing I hated
Some people feel like it’s being dragged with 0 progress and that the ending should’ve come a long time ago; but I feel like this is fine, I’ve been loving it and haven’t really had an issue with anything other than situations like the phone call cliche
People r also saying it hasn’t been fun lately/ the arc has been shit; and that it’s been shitty drawings and plot, I’d argue it def hasn’t, Idt every arc has to be fun nor that it’s shit
U could make the argument for characters not acting how they acted at the beginning but people ain’t robots
Sure it’s slower than at the beginning but that’s natural and fine to me, and a ton is about to prolly happen