Tensei Kizoku no Isekai Boukenroku ~Jichou wo Shiranai Kamigami no Shito~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 17

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@deinhart She has a higher court rank than him, so I don’t think he had the ability to refuse. Or, at least, no excuse good enough to refuse her.
 
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Well, he could say he's Cain but also has memories and knowledge from someone from Japan.
It's not really that much of a bind.
 
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So I guess a prerequisite of being a hero is being able to read Japanese. That means most of us will never be heroes.
 
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"Just what are you?"
A possible end of the world, if you make him an enemy, lol.
 
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I don't even know why i'm criticizing this, it's not even my habit
Just ignore my comment if you don't like reading a text wall

I read this because the art look good but still no interesting event happen and i starting to lose interest on it. Especially the characters, its just a super generic and boring character.
I hope something unique coming out from cain because he is way too ordinary. Other character as well, some of them doesn't have a strong background it feels like they just a supplemental chara walking by.
But well the annoying part is i don't know where the story goes. The story pace is too damn slow, it feels like reading a daily life of a super kid having a smooth life and good shit.
It's not wrong tho, mostly mc from isekai manga will try having a better life on their new world (not all of them) and this kid lucky enough to get that luxury life from beginning and even given an absolute power from "God"
 
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@totalvamp There are some weird sentences that stood out the most to me.

Page 3: Do you still not feel confident in my appearance?
Wasn't she just boasting about herself, like "I'm kind of confident in my looks"?

Page 4: When I left the house, I couldn't comeback until I found a marriage partner...
Shouldn't it be "I already told them I wou'dn't comeback until I found a marriage partner so don't worry"?

Page 5: Although she's a pushy woman...
Missing the part "it saved me"?

Page 9: > Your majesty! > I want to marry with Baron Cain

Page 11: Seems like you fixed it.
 
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Okay, well colour me surprised, this is one of the only isekai I am reading that seems to be getting better...
 
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thanks I'll fix the issues.
My Japanese is still bad so its really hard to understand the nuance in some sentences
 

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