Right? I think the dreaming metaphor is just used too often.Looks pretty good. I'm starting to think this manga is just badly written tbh. The sentences don't flow neatly like the other manga you did.
You also confused middle school and high school again though. She's a third year trying to get into his high school, which wouldn't make sense if she was a high school student.
Yeah it really feels like it's written in short form Japanese where subjects are being left out (by the writer) and its left to interpretation by the reader.Right? I think the dreaming metaphor is just used too often.
I straight up feel like Alice in Alice in Wonderland. What's going on? Who knows, it's a dream or something
Anime made a lot of changes to original story, order of events is completely different, and there are many new scenes as well.wait what... i just read the manga and goes to the latest chapter after watching the anime. but this is definitely different write compared to the anime right? on anime sajou already know that this girl isnt a college mature girl when both of them goes to beach shop and sees her picture with her dad wearing that uniform from middle school