The translation quality is pretty good, it all makes sense and is cohesive. I doubt anyone reasonable would complain about the quality of the translations when there's machine translate copy-paste war crimes against language posts out on the internet.
Thanks for the release! And don't delete it D:
Even if someone else releases the same chapter, readers can just decide which one they'll rather read, it's fine. The quality is fine too. Nothing wrong with any of this.
Keep up the good work~!
I dont really see any translation error to be honest, the grammar isnt weird, there isn't any typo and i can perfectly understand the story like any normal chapter.