Training Regimes of the World’s Strongest Women - Vol. 2 Ch. 12 - All Out War

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So trying to frame it as the girl not wanting mc to die in battle is a bit weird and doesn’t hit too well but i am still absolutely loving this fight. it looks Fantastic and our man just keeps growing with every swing.

eventually he’ll probably even outclass his teachers.
 
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So trying to frame it as the girl not wanting mc to die in battle is a bit weird and doesn’t hit too well but i am still absolutely loving this fight. it looks Fantastic and our man just keeps growing with every swing.

eventually he’ll probably even outclass his teachers.
Yeah. She was literally just trying to kill him, now she doesn't want to see him die.

Also why would you report the person you were just trying to kill as missing?

Finally Cross losing focus in the middle of the battle was just plain stupid after how focused and serious he had been.

But the art is beautiful.
 
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Overall mediocre chapter. Nice art, but too much cliche and logical inconsistency. Discount Mordred's motivations and actions are all over the place, and MC is too much of a goody two-shoes to feel like a real character.

In an ideal world, he would have simply run away (maybe attracting the monster's attention if he was feeling extra generous) and survived long enough for one of his teachers to arrive and save the day, ending up half dead but still having grown from the encounter.
 
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Man this was almost a decent fight and then they had to have that clichee bullshit where the MC just forgets hes fighting and they both almost die from being hit...and then he just creates a skill out of thin air? why?? They already had a winning strategy though???? ugh.
Also lemme guess he gained that growth skill after killing that giant thing at the start?
 
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it doesn’t make sense when She LITERALLY tried to kill him 5 minutes ago but now she doesn’t want him to die?
This author is trying to make her a love interest so much, which she already is because of the cover, the hate/kill > love interest is so used these days.
 

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