Questions: Do I keep the honorifics with the titles? Like priestess-sama / Hero-dono or just remove them and only use with names only? Someone said they find this weird, need input!
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I will go for keep them, specially since it's not like all the characters use them like that, we got the king just calling her as hero hibiki to himself, while joshua uses the hero-dono (which implies she talks in a more formal tone, which later will know why she does that too), then at the meeting he uses dono for chiya and hibiki as a way to show his respect to the hero and the priestess, to show the Laurel Federation he values both equally, specially since that is part of what they were talking about (getting chiyo in danger), -dono could be replaced by Sir/Lady, but then how will we go for -sama, because in the case of laurel saying high priestess-sama sounds like she would have an even higher rank, so it would be kinda hard to easily replace, and well in the case of Laurel, they are the japanese type of hyuman, so they using -sama is pretty much part of their culture.
normally I would really want to see the moment with the merchant guild leader, buuuuut this chapter was sincerely great, well it was also a full canon chapter again, the POV of Limia's kingdom is great, because it's not like they are fully the good guys (we know for how the 1st prince thought at the start about the demi humans, they think like most hyumans as a basis), but we also got the reunion with totally not japan land (Laurel), and Tomoe is still nervous...
Keep the honorifics.
What question Tomoe wanted to ask to Makoto? I don't remember anime talked about it.
remember when Root explained how hard is for Makoto to actually get back to earth, which for him sounded like crazy stuff, they talk later and Root asked why she faked not understanding how Makoto could in fact return to his world, she wants to know if he would leave them behind if he gets the chance to return, she's afraid of his answer.
last page... ooff finally, the manga did fantastically when Makoto break the first time, please don't fail for the 2nd ... anime did okay, but makoto's pov would go better in manga that has been always a lot more detailed.