Click their profile then "start conversation", but unfortunately they need to create a forum profile first, separate but linked to their primary MD profile, and they have not done so yet.
As for PriestOfSanguine: Actually not terrible job, here. As was mentioned, the word-wrap was poorly done with the first few pages, because it broke words badly, but you obviously hit a stride later on that did a much better job of typesetting. There were only those two lines (that Daipinchi above retranslated for you) that were badly off and not understandable, so good first shot at it. Looking forward to the rest of what you do as you continue to skill up at it!
Was this a v1 that was changed less than 10 minutes from your posting? Because every single line just has "she" in relation to Toriela in the chapter I read.