Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 9 Ch. 1 - Cruel Villainess, Do Not Touch

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Vol 9 is here, please tell me if there are any mistakes or typos in this chapter. I'll try to fix it tomorrow morning. Thank you so much

the villainess in this chapter... is a villainess? or is it yandere? menhera? I couldn't tell them apart
Well… Since you asked for it!
  • Page 7: "Seeking refuge in me only worsen" -> "worsens"
  • Page 7: "You've choosen" -> "chosen"
  • Page 15: Myuria is refered as a duke's daughter, but she was a marquis's daughter earlier
  • Page 15: "He deserve someone better" -> "deserves"
  • Page 16: "Asta-sama deserve" -> "deserves"
  • Page 29: "I've always… love" -> "loved"
  • Page 30: "That was something I write" -> "wrote"
  • Page 30: "I thought you only like" -> "liked"
  • Page 31: "It kinca makes sense" -> "kinda"
  • Page 31: "The girl who approach you" -> "approached"
  • Page 31: "Yet she have the audacity" -> "has"
  • Page 34: "You should've wear" -> not sure about this one, but it should be "should wear" or "should've worn" (I think the first is better)
  • Page 37: "In the end, Myuria leave this world" -> "left"
  • Page 37: "I've read her dairy" -> "diary"
  • Page 37: "She never once written" -> "wrote"
  • Page 39: "every day […] shines" -> either "each" or "shine" (either both singular form or both plural form)
 
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This one was great. Two people just being in love, even if it is heavy in some aspects, they know how to work well with each other.
 

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Vol 9 is here, please tell me if there are any mistakes or typos in this chapter. I'll try to fix it tomorrow morning. Thank you so much

the villainess in this chapter... is a villainess? or is it yandere? menhera? I couldn't tell them apart
Page 5:
"She choose Asta as HIS fiance because of his looks" -> should ber HER
 
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Unexpected... But I am dead more curious about chapter 3 in ToC, something about dragon was a former dog???? Lol

Bet it's just- "my dog is the only one who loves me, he's actually a dragon and we're gonna fuck"
 
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This might actually be my favorite chapter of this anthology, and this is my favorite anthology, so I guess that's the highest praise I can give.
 
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Bro, page 37 gave me a heart attack.

Turns out bittersweet ending, instead something like "Your Lie In April." and "The summer you were there."
While it look like bittersweet ending because the ammount of page, i think it fit a happy ending more. Cause they are getting together and spent time just off screen
 
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A villainess that actually acted evil? Hell yeah! I also think the approach they took for this story is relatively unique too. I would prefer an actually villainous villainess be the main point of view, but this is the next best thing
 
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another good one, right at the start of the volume, feel like those at the start of vol8 prolly were a fumble from the many good ones
 
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Some of these upcoming chapter titles are amazing and sound like they'll be a great time.
 
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hold on now
a villainess story where the MC is a dude and actually loves the supposed villain!?
Nice!
 

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