Though I May Be a Villainess, I'll Show You I Can Obtain Happiness! - Vol. 11 Ch. 3 - The Revenge of a Certain VIllainess

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Sorry for the wait, it's easter
this chapter is just... I'm having quite a hard time translating, I had to triple check everything. out of topic, but Opera GX is genuinely terrible for uploading a chapter. It literally took me half an hour to upload this chapter and no, my internet is fine, I even tried using chrome and it works flawlessly. I literally don't know what's the problem with my GX
 
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I don't know, it's not bad, but it feels like it doesn't click with the other stories. Like she isn't a terrifying woman, pretty much worked as a team to defeat them and it should have been more important to pretty much destroy royalty.
Again, I wouldn't call it bad, but felt different in this anthology.
 
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A little more dark, a little more efficient, a little more fresh. unlike the previous ones, i feel like this is an Amuse Bouche, a sampler to whet the appetite for what's to come. The others dragged on, while i hope this will continue.8/10
 

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really good setup / interesting scenario for a story. too bad it had to be used in the anthology. lots of tell, because not much time for showing.
3-4 volumes of political intrigue, with solidly built characters could have been a fun time.
 
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This one shows a lot of promise and it stands out against a lot of the more generic stories, but I think it suffers from the format of being only a single chapter. It has to rush through this elaborate multi-stage revenge with a bunch of characters that are barely touched on in order to race to the finish line.

If this got turned into a single volume manga with more room to breathe, it'd be significantly better.
 

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