Between the cosplay, make up, scary contacts, and photoshop, I can't even tell if that girl is cute or not. First impressions are an immediate: "No!" and a cringe, but if I take those things into consideration she may be? Maybe? Those contacts, though...
As for the chapter, it wasn't bad, I suppose; however, it was slathered and caked in melodrama and cheese. From the 'shackled quints' to the 'cherish radiant memories' thing, it went a bit too far for me.