@Swezed
Title: "
Wasn't" (it's a verb, verbs are always capitalized in titles).
Page 7: Was it supposed to be
five hours? Were there more than sixty students in Yatora's class?
Page 15: "Choices" is plural and is to be followed by a plural verb.
Page 21: Is it Nekoshiki or Nekoyashiki? You have both on the page.
Page 38: A rogue "various".
Page 40: "Each" is to be followed by a singular verb.
Page 46: "Critique" should be singular here because it's a single process of evaluation, not a batch of finished works in a journalistic genre of
critique.
Same page: "
Its growing population".
Page 47: "If there
were one or two people" (the operative word is "people", hence plural).
Page 54: "The layers".
Page 55: "
Its mikoshi".
Are you going with AmE ("utilize") or BrE ("centre")? Trying to do both is weird.
Thanks for the multi-release, but I'm not sure if it's worth rushing the QC to this extent to get things out just a few hours sooner. Surely we all can wait at least
that much longer.