To fix, you first need to break itWhen in doubt as a romance writer.
Add a new romantic interest to your story out of thin air.
Works 0% of the time to fix your story guaranteed.
But it's already a square...So the author tried to sell it as triangle love..but suddenly a new chalengger come?
Square the fk up,author
This has to be it, surely. Suddenly shows up in the chapter where he mentions his brother had died (and was a patient six years ago.)New girl had a crush on the dead brother and now it’s weird
Also it’s no mistake that she’s related to pharmaceuticals, doubtless her father’s company had something to do with the experimental drug that saved pres.
Seen worse in real life...oh my GOD i can't take this anymore, how can you miss that a girl is in love with you when she's giving you bedroom eyes 90% of the time you're together? fucking hell, just get a room already
This is so far better than Nisekoi, as it doesn't have stupid interruptions during critical confessions/revealations that further delay the plot.This shit have too much Nisekoi vibes from the forgotten childhood to random chicks introduced this makes me wanna kms again