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Honestly, the basic logic behind the idea is sound, and she doesn't quite look bad in that dress, but she should've thought long about it and taken into consideration more things. Yun Ling probably would like a woman who reminds him of his mom, but that'd probably only stand if that reminder is natural is seems unintentional. Plus, the thing you should really emulate is not her appearance, but rather her personality and aura. If she made herself act like she had the same general temperament and attitude of his mother, while also wearing clothes that both emphasize that similarity and fit with her appearance, she'd probably do well.
In this case, not only does this similarity seem intentional due to how close it is, it just doesn't work with the rest of her persona. She keeps acting like a chipmunk, which really clashes with those clothes. Honestly, even if she just wore mildly similar clothing and acted the same, it'd be so much better because it wouldn't look so awkward.
Really, the aim here should've been to give off a similar feeling, not just look like her. Those are very different things. If she attempted to emulate Luxia's phoenix-like persona and energy, he'd probably be pretty interested. At the very least, don't make your eyes so big. It's not surprising when the artist gives her narrowed eyes she looks so much better.
In this case, not only does this similarity seem intentional due to how close it is, it just doesn't work with the rest of her persona. She keeps acting like a chipmunk, which really clashes with those clothes. Honestly, even if she just wore mildly similar clothing and acted the same, it'd be so much better because it wouldn't look so awkward.
Really, the aim here should've been to give off a similar feeling, not just look like her. Those are very different things. If she attempted to emulate Luxia's phoenix-like persona and energy, he'd probably be pretty interested. At the very least, don't make your eyes so big. It's not surprising when the artist gives her narrowed eyes she looks so much better.