I'm both a bit flattered and a bit embarassed - this is all hand translation. I tried to get not only the meaning of what the author was saying, but also the direct expression, which sometimes only more-or-less works out in English. I just didn't want to be disingenuinous and write something the author did not say.
Going forward I'll try to make it sound more fluid. My current plan is to go back at the end of the series and revise all the chapters that have failures. But right now, I want to see the end of the story and bring all the friends on this journey with me.
I have all the digital volumes of this series, if you message me on discord (@Rillant) I can send them to you. I can also show you how to properly typeset and export them, it will improve the quality of your chapters.