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@Xelda so if a child told you she's aiming to be mistress of an old man, and then you saw her jump in the lap of an old man and stroke him to get some paedophilic groove going, you would keep a total bored poker face? I think that says more about you and maybe the author than about the character. It is not normal to not react when you see a child solicit an adult sexually, no matter how much warning you've been given. Even if she wanted to keep a poker face, we should at least get some outraged inner monologue, some reminder that she can't believe this is expected of children, etc.
As it is, it's like she's unfazed. How much of an emotional piece of driftwood do you have to be to not feel horrifyingly sorry for that prostituted child? And the entire chapter advertises how childish and kiddish she really is too.
I'm sorry, I don't think I'm gonna budge on this. Seriously, imagine you and your friend stumble on a dead body and your friend is like "aw well, alright I guess..." and when you ask how they can be so calm they say "oh I watched a lot of CSI, plus we sort of were told we might see a corpse here right?" as if that would constitute a normal excuse for not being frazzled.
As it is, it's like she's unfazed. How much of an emotional piece of driftwood do you have to be to not feel horrifyingly sorry for that prostituted child? And the entire chapter advertises how childish and kiddish she really is too.
I'm sorry, I don't think I'm gonna budge on this. Seriously, imagine you and your friend stumble on a dead body and your friend is like "aw well, alright I guess..." and when you ask how they can be so calm they say "oh I watched a lot of CSI, plus we sort of were told we might see a corpse here right?" as if that would constitute a normal excuse for not being frazzled.